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requesting a review

Unread postby » pezimus » Mon, 31 December 2012, 9:53 pm | #1 of 3 |

i know this might be unusual but i am requesting a review of my post to see if has to much information or not enough any opinion would be appreciated and thanks the here is a link to find my post.

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Re: requesting a review

Unread postby » genieswish » Wed, 2 January 2013, 1:55 pm | #2 of 3 |

the name of the site alone screams HYIP and there isnt enough info in that post or on the site to cconvince me its not a ponzi, the video lost me at 20 seconds - but i have a vey low concentration threshold LOL
it says no marketing ever - but you are doing your very best to get your referral link clicked.....so it must be a lie?

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Re: requesting a review

Unread postby » MOC » Wed, 2 January 2013, 2:02 pm | #3 of 3  Reply

Starting with topic titles.

In forums it all starts with an interesting/informative topic title.
Your title is up against every other title. It needs to be SEO'd for humans.
examples...

TITLE • $100 for your top ten - of anything!
TITLE • Advertising on facebook - 60 minutes 99,615 pageviews
TITLE • make easy money online
TITLE • make $20-$80 per referral with zipnadazilch + payment proof

When you search the forums, topic titles play a huge role in weather you go on to view the topic. From my examples, your topic title is the one lacking in that it doesn't let me know whats going on inside, and would be the topic that I would be least likely to click on first, or take notice of amongst other clearer defined topics.

I haven't looked at the actual offer yet, so thanks for the review genie. ;)

*EDIT: Added your changed title to the list above to see the difference and it reads alot better.


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